2009년 11월 30일 월요일

Where I'm from

I am from brownish dirt
that filled with worms
I am from small kitchen,
from toys in the refrigerator.
I am from the small hill,
I remember my castle on the top of the hill.

I’m from hot Bongapang and warm Ohdeng gukmol
I am from black bubble of my grandfather’s stomach,

the water from my mother's eyes.

I am from those moment...

now waiting new places

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  1. I liked that you compare yourself with foods, but I think you need more figurative language

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